Monday, 1 July 2013

The Clockwork Women

Recently (well, not that recently) I read The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood, and it made me think.  About society, about my self-worth, and about losing my mind. About how we define ourselves, and how easy it is for a country to just change, if the right (or wrong) people are in charge. Anyway, I wrote a little something after the great Atwood herself, I'd love some feedback, adore it. So just let me know what you think. And I swear, I'm not angry, I don't think men are out to get me. It's just a little something that I couldn't let go of until I wrote about it.
P.s. We're listening to Kate Nash's Album Girl Talk. Is it just me, or is it a little tuneless and shouty? Reminds me of spoken word poetry. I find it hard to like, but my sister is bopping along visibly empowered, so Nash must be doing something right.


The Clockwork Women

We wait in a room that smells of wipes and cleaned up shit. The heels of our painfully tight shoes tap together as we cross our hands at the wrist. Every face is the same, a little pale, begging a night’s sleep, but wide awake, eyes nervously ticking. Mostly either a little too wide or a little too slim of face, but I’m pretty sure the bone structure will melt over the days to come under a spurt of flesh. I clutch my standard issue handbag tighter, the white on my knuckles growing as I clench. It is all so horribly slow.

Finally we are ushered in, a big messy clump of heels against the linoleum floor. The freckled redheads, the corn blondes, the mousy browns, all stand straighter, their individual strokes of colours lost amongst the scraped back buns. Somebody attempts not to cough, but creates a sudden splutter, a ripple as people step away, and in the centre of this she starts to viciously rub anti-bac over her hands, eyes glinting nervously at them. They stand watching us, with flint faces that don’t even flicker. We vibrate with anticipation, but not a word is said, the air is filled with the humming of anxious female minds. I flex my fist; I’ve bustled my way to the front, others eye my enviously. Probably they think me a worn out hag with an overlarge nose. I’ve borne so many times my breasts are beginning to sag and my lips purse. I know how this is going to go.

Suddenly, with the elegant finesse of practise and distaste, one of them lifts off the copper lid to reveal the spewing red liquid, Dozens of tiny bodies float about the froth, too static for comfort, tiny hands open, ready to be grasped. We pause for a breath, dust hangs in the air, and then we surge.

I elbow, I push, and I collide the various stick like parts of my body with those of other women. There is a satisfying yelp as I storm up the steps, mine and the feet of many others clanging like an angry beast from the time of Gods. I’m the first up, receive a gratuitous nod, and plunge my hand in; I’ve singled him out. Blond, healthy looking, guaranteed survival. But as I reach, another tiny body collides with my hand, and with a shock I feel it impregnate me. At once four hands and a clench of fingers wrench me back causing me to stumble. Uneasy am I with the unknown infant newly placed in my abdomen. Nobody at the heaving front pays me any attention, but a couple round eyes at the back watch me, like snakes lustily watching a pregnant sheep. I am taken by this sense of colossal fullness not unbeknown to be, but all I think is ‘you’re not the right one,’ tapping my handbag impatiently.

I pay my money at the desk, precious coins that could feed a thousand street brats. ‘Congratulations.’ Says the girl at the till, pushing my receipt into my hand, eyes already on the next woman staggering forwards.

The pregnancy is hard, like always. I stumble from room to room in a daze, my thin hips heaving and breaking beneath me. Finally it is born, a crop of black hair on a cold blue body. This is the fourth time, and I don’t watch it be wheeled out the room. Instead I look at my hand as I close another finger down into the fist. ‘One more chance’ I think; a growing chain of lives that never were wrapping around the depressions and wrinkles on my body. There’s nobody home to watch me struggle back out to the shit scented rooms, ready and panting to do my duty to our precious father land. Like a dog returning to the one who brandishes the whip, I come for what I am owed by ancestral right, and what may never be mine to possess.

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